Factory Isolation (SI Multicross)

World 1
AN: An amusing self indulgent riff off the whole SI craze going on. Especially the PA ones. This one has a decidedly different bent of course. This is just for fun and likely won't be updated often if at all. I'm calling it an SI, but it's not really. I'd probably be too lazy to do half the stuff on here :)

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Factory Isolation / Fan Fic - TV Tropes
Entry 1

I'm writing this more out of a sense of duty than anything else. Putting it in the system so that there's a record when my will cracks or I do something stupid and die. There are other, more verbose entries logged into this fucking thing, but writing things down might at least let the next person learn how screwed they are. If I don't manage anything. Which is more than likely.

First, if you're reading this, I'm likely dead and you're the next victim. Know this right off.

1) You've got a tool and system loosely based on the game factorio. That means you mine stuff, have bullshit compression techniques, and have a miniature factory attached to you invisibly.
2) That means biters exist. Those really annoying things that do nothing more than attack you in the game. They're real, and they're like attack dogs on steroids.
3) Building a rocket will not free you.

It's the last one that had killed the guy who made the first entry in this thing. He launched the rocket, and figured that would let him out. Since it was based on the game that's what it was supposed to do right? There's like one entry after that, and it's not good reading.

For me, I woke up one day on grassland. Had this freaky graphic interface light up over my eyes, and then found I could build things. It was a bit fun at first even. I built myself a miner, and a few fabricators. Even built a research station. Though they're more 'factory administrators' instead of research things. Basically you just need a few otherwise the smart stuff in your factory sort of just putters out or doesn't work at all. It seems to be sort of merged with whatever the hell gives me the ability to gesture and compress things.

So yeah, if this were any other situation this would be pretty cool. This is borderline magical shit. The only thing that makes me say it's not magic is the way the GUI is set up. There's enough logic to it that I'm pretty sure it's technology. Even if the technology is First One bullshit.

The problem is twofold really. One, I'm alone. Humans aren't meant to be alone. I can handle it better than most, but I give a few months at least before I get loopy. Two, I only have guest access to this doodad attached to me somehow. There's no designer, no way of doing AIs or research, and nothing but the standard blueprints that are easily accessible.

This is why I'm a victim, and other people were too. They were pulled in somehow, got this thing attached, and then given no directive. I've counted at least five different entries, and there are probably more from people who didn't bother to write things down. I'd be extraordinarily tempted to do something similar, but I've got a damnable sense of duty, and a stubborn streak a mile wide on certain things.

I'm treating it as a puzzle and a challenge. Giving into despair will only have another person have the same issue. I'd rather it end here, even if I have to find a way to destroy this thing. Since there's no name, I'm going to call it the Seed Factory, or Seed for short. The other entries are less 'polite.' I'll probably be using their names most of the time.

A checklist for me to keep sane with.

1) Read other entries on the Seed
2) Set Up a very small base with automated ammo and supplies
3) Work on jailbreaking the Seed

Entry 2

Depresed from entries. Biters are keeping me up too. Lost a lot of weight, and I don't think it's a healthy amount. The rations that I have are bland and tasteless. Filling, but I struggle to eat them. Going to see if there's a building or shelter in the blueprints. I'm certain I don't have them all, but there are still a lot.

Entry 3

Found a designer! One of the previous entries have it. You have to think 'command line' and then 'Out Manufacture Settings.' Well, it's not really a designer. I know my first entry said there wasn't, but that's only sort of true. You can sort of detail custom outputs. It's an outright horrible tool to use. I think it's mostly meant to do cludge changes. It could be old too, but I have no idea.

There's a few dozen blueprints in here outside the standard stuff. A house, an automated fighting bot, and a bath. All of them are horribly crude compared to the other stuff. I'm guessing they were made by the same person that figured it out. I'm going to play some with it.

Entry 4

I... Don't know how long it's been since my last entry. I'm fairly certain I started hallucinating. At the very least the biters and the lack of other sounds are getting to me. I'm sane right now... I think? Going to reread my other entries and try to do something.

Entry 5

Note to self, even with hyper tech, guns have kick and firing on the move sucks. Lucky I only zinged my foot and not outright destroyed it. An injury likely means death, and I've been really lucky.

Also, apparently I have the shakes. It's one thing to talk about shooting something, and another to do it.

Entry 6

I'm on a time limit. Well, I was always on a time limit, but now I've got another one. In the game factorio, the biters are just sort of there. Even if you really piss them off, they have a cap on how big they get.

These don't. And I've already noticed them growing.

Frankly I expect to be terrified later. Right now it's still not hitting me.

Entry 7

I really want to go home.

Entry 8

Need more. Scared. Bleeding everywhere.

Entry 9

Had a breakdown. Think I blew up something, hard to tell. Don't recall if I had built something in an area.

Waking up with a biter trying to claw down your neck is a really nice way of learning how you react to panic. I get really violent. I think I broke my hand too, but it's numb so it's hard to tell. Found painkiller recipe. It's the goooooood stuff.

Entry 10

Ok, I had a minor water phobia. Now I can't even take baths.

Tip if anyone's reading this, don't go near the water. Biter bioforms in the water don't care about size.

Entry 11

I have some breathing room. Not much. Only about ten walls, and forty turrets. I'm going to need to find another place for iron.

Did I talk about that? The miners here are sort of like the game, but ore's all buried deep. So they just do a loud grinding noise and go down to get it. It's pretty cool since I'm certain that it would require an entire team to get even half what this thing gets.

Sure it needs to be refined, but it's still awesome.

Sort of like the assemblers. They're like 3d printers, but better. They use some weird compression tech to make things that are far bigger than them. Then spit them out in the size of a brick. I can deploy them by waving my hand.

It's awesome, and really useful when you have a small army of things breathing down on you.

Especially since I need new armor now. I think I forgot to clean up. It's hard to tell you know? Days blend together when you're the only one around.

I'm pretty certain I needed to do something else too.

Oh yeah, I need more iron.

Entry 12

Doubled my turrets. Made power armor.

The power armor's nifty. Like it a lot. I only had to replace it twice. Once when a big worm swallowed me. The other when the shield I made got overwhelmed by some spitter things. There was a breach in one of the automated areas.

I've sort of started using the bots I found. They're frankly idiots that crash into walls.

It's better than me running all over the place. I think I can get a full nights sleep for once maybe.

Entry 13

Found designs for base building. Blueprints from previous entries likely. Some of them are pretty organized. I've got flying bots now!

Wheeee! The little flying bots are kinda cute too. I love their chirps. Been trying to get one to sing for me. Better than the biter noises or the damned grinding of the miners.

Entry 14

Chirpy blew up. Didn't do it right, and I shot it.

Entry 15

Really want to go home.

Entry 16

Passed out yesterday. Think from lack of food? Can't think much. Set automation to defend me. Going to rest and force myself to eat. Have managed to dig out a lot of dirt and am sleeping in a hole. The house sucks, and fell over when I kicked it.

Entry 17

I'm sanish now. I think. The rest helped, and while I can still see my ribs, it's not as bad.

I needed to jailbreak the prison thing right? I called it a Factory Seed.

Thought of a way to do it. Had some time to think. Running out of it though.

It's connected to the 'research buildings.' Or at least those buildings that were research ones in the game. The dome things. They're like big computers.

I'm going to build a lot of them. If there's a hard connection, there's probably way to spoof it.

Entry 18

One of the previous victims had a password cracker. Brute force if I remember the name right. Woulda been cute if the main account on this fucking thing wasn't throttled. You can input a password a second. There are a max of twenty characters. Theoretically it'd crack it with time.

I think it'd only do that in a centry or two maybe?

I'm going with my idea. Got enough research buildings that it's most of my base, and my base isn't small anymore.

Hope I manage something. The biters are now so large that normal bullets don't work at all. I'm dipping into rockets, but they're losing effectiveness fast. There's nothing bigger in the blueprints.

Entry 19

I'm not a fighter. It wouldn't matter without the proper tools anyway. The power armor helps a lot, but it's still got it's limits.

The biters are bigger than I can handle easily now. A worm ate a tank I built with me in it.

I'm really lucky I had a tank of 'rocket fuel' in my Seed. The stuff is hard to ignite, but with some desperation it's possible. And considering how much I used, the entire worm exploded.

Needed to replace my suit and the tank was totaled.

Half my base smells like burning flesh. Taken to wearing my suit all the time.

Entry 20

Figured out an exploit to crack the device. The key was the research buildings. I had to have them spam the system with all the commands they could process. The lag sort of caused the thing to crash.

After doing that a few dozen times I figured out how to force it into a safe mode.

I've got a wicked headache from the GUI spamming into my head, but I'm into the system now. It's called a Dimensional Miner's Assistant. So Factory Seed was sort of right I suppose?

It's got a lot of data in it, but none of it useful. From what I can tell skimming, the tools meant to get enough to get the resources into orbit, and defend yourself some. That's it.

There's a lot of data in it again though. I can't parse it all quickly, and I was hoping there was a weapon somewhere.

Entry 21

Fuck.

Entry 22

I want to cry. But crying would mean stopping. I can't. I can only run.

Entry 23

Got some breathing room, and figured out what's powering the biters. It took a long time to figure it out, but I just realized there's no birds. No bugs. Only trees and grass. The biters are connected to it somehow.

It's what gave me the breathing room. I climbed a mountain, and am basically squatting in some snow. No biters or nests nearby.

I'm going to do something stupid.

Entry 24

This was really stupid.

Entry 25

Active volcanos are pretty, even if you're running like hell.

Entry 26

Ashes ashes, we all fall down.

Entry 27

I'm really glad my power armor has it's own air supply.

Entry 28

Oh, now that I've gotten some more room, gonna explain what I did. A lot of the tech I have is pretty black box stuff that I have no idea what to do with. The miners though are relatively simple. They dig holes and bring things up.

Sure they have a lot of complex sensors, and other things, but the core thing is how they dig.

I can make a LOT of explosives. And some of it's pretty future tech. That's including the fact that there are a few fuel types in the database on the DMA that are unique and not part of convensional usage. They have a lot of energy though.

So I brute force adjusted one of the miners. Slapped it down on a mountain, and jammed as much explosive as I could down it.

Some of the biggest and nastiest stuff I could do. Enough that when I was done, half the mountain blew up.

One active volcano made. This would hopefully kill the trees, and kill biters nearby. I can survive without sun and in poisonous fumes thanks to the rations I can have built. The trees can't.

I plan on doing this in several areas. I've got a few macro builders. They can build stuff, and if the biters are away, I can have them build in peace. I'll need to manually build the first one, but when you have the blueprints it's pretty easy. Just need the time and resources.

Entry 29

It worked! No more biters nearby, and factories starting to be built! I've got plans for more volcanos now, and have refined it a little bit. I'm no scientist, but when all you're doing is making explosives remotely, you can afford a few screw ups.

I've got a rather large crater, and have to replace a lot of remote bots though.

Entry 30

I don't think I've talked about the bots much. The ones in the blueprints are outright bullshit things. They can compress, expand, and repair things in an instant. I can set them to deforest half a forest in a moment, and get a pile of lumber a few seconds later. They're also non-combat. The combat ones are nifty, but run out of power quickly, and have to be remade.

They also can follow blueprints really well. And can outright shape terrain to make things easier. They fly, and they do this rather cute little chirp to communicate.

Honestly I like them a lot. They're dumb as a bunch of bricks, but they get jobs done.

The reason I'm talking about them is because if you have blueprints, and an ability to order them, you can make some pretty big things. As in cover a tenth of the world in machinery.

It doesn't sound like much, but this is done by little flesh and blood me.

I've managed to set off several more volcanos doing this, and I think I have enough breathing room to finally read through the data in the DMA.

Entry 31

Well, there's a lot of stuff in here. Mostly tutorials. How to build things. How to adjust things, and how to direct things. Efficiency tips. A few big space freighter creations. Something that sort of boosts containers up into orbit.

Medical stuff too. That I built right off. It needs a massive amount of processing power, but I have that. I'm healthier now than I've ever been. It's basically an automated diagnostic and treatment faculty. Quite powerful, and just as bullshit as the rest of the compression tech.

It even has a few cybernetic things, but those require a medical doctor. There's even a medical tutorial line to eventually learn that I think.

No history. No other entries.

Need to keep looking.

Entry 32

Found dimensional tech. It was buried and seems to have been deleted?

Entry 33

New volcano made. Know why the tech was deleted. Really glad I activated it really far away.

Entry 34

Experimented again, this time after adjusting the tech significantly. Still new volcano. Caught something hitting it from orbit?

Entry 35

Oh, there's a big fucking thing up in the sky and I can't see it. That's the only explanation for what's going on. On the plus side I have a enough volcanos that I'm certain the biters aren't coming back.

I'm not a scientist. I don't know rockets. But I have all this future tech that can boost things into orbit, and an entire world to use resources from.

Lets see if I can get lucky.

Entry 36

I think I should have invested in a bunker. Falling stars are cool, but not when you know they're rockets filled with explosives. One of them got far too close for comfort. And I had to rebuild a factory. Not that big a deal now, I've been able to expand horribly fast now thanks to the lack of opposition.

Entry 37

Hit the big thing. No damage. Need a bigger boom.

Might I just say having a clear goal to work towards makes me surprsingly happy and sane? I don't care how long I've been gone, it's just nice to have a goal. I want some good food so badly. Well and other things. Someone to talk with would be nice.

Entry 38

Need a bigger boom.

Entry 39

Need an even bigger boom.

Entry 40

Made a mini sun! Boom big enough.

I'm finally going to be able to leave this place.

Unfortuantely it's going to be a bit of a one way trip. I'm packing everything I can into a tank, and considering my compression tech, that's a lot, but that's peanuts compared to the amount of resources I have laying around.

The simple fact is this DMA is specialized to mine materials, build buildings to assist in that, and then send it off. If I were to guess it's meant to have a team of people be dropped on a planet and just start building. Then they're picked up and can leave.

The rest is automated to send at times.

So the only dimensional tech blueprint I have is basically a big send portal. I don't even know exactly what it does. Only that it sends things.

Oh there's a lot of tutorials about it but it makes my brain melt. I might be able to get back if I really needed to, but I'd need to remake the entire thing, and it's got some hefty requirements.

The worst thing that could happen is I die. I've attached the password, my blueprints, and everything I could think of to the guest account.

The next person will hopefully be able to progress more.
 
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World 2
AN: More stuff. This is mostly me writing when I'm inspired. I've got a few quests I'm running that I don't want to neglect. Hence why I'm not making promises.

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Entry 1-1

Starting up a new entry and notation since I'm not dead. Yay for me. Admittedly I've got no clue where the fuck I am, and in retrospect throwing myself into a random area could have been far worse, but I can't really say I've got a good sense of safe practices anymore. I'm fairly certain I've been alone for more than a year, so I'm lucky I still remember how to talk.

I do know how to talk still right? Testing one two. Yeah, I do. Fortunately the training things have nice soothing voices so I can be certain I've not had a language drift.

Well, maybe. I can't rule out an auto translate feature.

Have I mentioned how much I despise not knowing how my stuff works. There's a difference between driving a car and knowing the basics, and throwing yourself off a cliff in hopes that something you strapped to your back works. That's what I did in the jump thing.

I'm extraordinarily lucky I just landed in a wasteland instead of on water or in orbit. I'm guessing there are a few failsafes on the dimensional launcher tech that keep it from doing somethings stupid.

I'm going to have to, horror of horrors, go through the tutorial to learn it completely. This is harder than it sounds. When I said it made my brain melt, I meant it. I think it's like PHD material to even get the basics. I don't got the time or the aptitude. Or the inclination really. I'm going to skim some of it and hope I can pick out what I need.

Entry 1-2

Well... I want to hurt myself, and something else. Found a dimensional 'catcher.' The counterpart for the launcher. It's buried in the blueprint files. Only found it cause the tutorial mentioned a few very distinct symbols, and the search on this thing is very robust when it cares to be.

I could have built it back on the biter planet and given myself a possible return point.

On the plus side, I did figure out enough that I can get back even without it. The coordinates are quite literally twenty different fields, but the DMA records the primary ones that indicate planets. Furthermore I've figured out that there are failsafes.

The tutorial is remarkably condescending about them. Something about stupid proofing the system.

I'd grumble, but considering my recent actions I'll grit my teeth and bear it.

More annoyingly is I've been walking for who knows how long and found nothing. That's why I got so far in the tutorial. There's nothing here but wasteland.

Entry 1-3

Preferred the nothing.

Entry 1-4

Oh god too many eyes! EVERYTHING IS NOW ON FIRE AND I'M HAPPY ABOUT IT.

Entry 1-5

More fire!

Entry 1-6

Well, found out where I am. Be nice if I remembered more than this good, that bad. I kinda wish I remembered a few prayers too.

On the plus side, not many things resist fire as hot as I've learned how to make it.

Entry 1-7

Fucking no blood for the blood god. I'm going to burn your idiot lemmings to ashes and stomp on their skulls.

Entry 1-8

Ok, that's it. I've had enough. I've been getting nightmares, my armor has gotten screwy, and fucking fighting Nurgle champions is the most disgusting thing in the world.

I've found a blueprint for a 'Planetary Bombardment Class Bunker.' Basically it's a home for a good hundred people capable of taking a planetary bombardment and keeping them safe. It's got so many redundant settings on it that you'd have to hit it with a direct hit multiple times to bring it down.

Remember that big ship? That thing made a volcano when it shot down. This thing is designed to tank a shot.

Hopefully that's enough to give me some defenses, and let me change out of this armor. I don't like the look of it, and the shields are flickering too much for comfort.

Entry 1-9

I'm in fucking Warhammer. That's the only explanation. Worse, I think I'm in the chaos wastes. I don't know the lore, but I remember that place being bad. I'm lost, and there are fucking hordes bearing down on me. Literal hordes.

To top it all off, I'm getting nightmares. Well that and other dreams that indicate demons. Or me losing my marbles. Neither one is good. I've been so isolated that they're picking up on what would hit me.

Seriously I nearly got tempted by a one of those demonettes. Fortunately my sex drive is really weird, so they squicked me out quick enough once they got going. Not going to say what it's like because I have no clue if they're reading this, but I'm safeish for now on that front.

Well, it's pretty obvious I hate the blood. Seriously there's kinky and then there's horrifying. The nurgle at least just do ick.

Also, toasted my armor with plasma. Only way to be sure.

Not seeing any mutations, so I'm hoping that my shielding on the armor I use is good enough. I don't have materials to really replace it too often. Admittedly I have a lot though.

This is why I've bunkered down. I've gotten to about half my ammo and explosives. Considering how fucking much I had, this is an accomplishment. I'm lost, I have no idea where I'm going, or even if I can get out.

So I'm going to mine and then see about doing the volcano trick again. Fire is hopefully the solution here.

Entry 1-10

Ever see a possessed miner? I have. Really freaky with the fire and brimstone. And the whole screaming for the blood of the living. It makes a halfway decent explosion at least, and the demon screaming as it dies is almost cathetic.

I'm not letting anything here interface with my systems. Too much chance of something infiltrating it. I've noted a tendency for weakness towards magic.

On the plus side, the automated turrets handle hordes fairly easily. I've got a flamethrower up just to keep the blood and the fucking nurgle horrors dead.

Entry 1-11

I had to replace my armor again. Down to my last suit.

Fought a sorcerer. The planner guy, not even bothering with the name since I forgot how to spell it. Bird motif. Think he noticed how I fried anything birdlike nearby because he didn't try for the temptation route. Just tried to do something sorcery like.

It cut through the armor and I've got a few new scars. One because I literally cut out the affected area. Didn't want to chance corruption.

I got a medical diagnostic, so I'm hoping that it can detect aberrations. It sees nothing at the moment.

I've gotten a radar up and it's managed to find the edge of the place. I'm taking a car and running soon after. I stay here longer I'm going to have to use a grenade on myself instead of the enemies.

If the get my DMA I've become the largest war criminal in any history. Not chancing that.

Entry 1-12

Car's wrecked. Well, several cars are wrecked.

You know those cheesy action movies? They're a lot more fun to watch.

Demonic horses are fucking terrifying. They go crunch when you run them over though.

Minor note, if my shields down, don't block the blades. I have future tech armor, and it still nearly took off my hand. Course it was one of those freaky demon things, so that might have done it too.

Also, I got the play walk away from the explosion. Of course it was more drive away and be several miles away, but the thought counts. I wired my entire base to go up with most of my explosions.

Shame I couldn't do the volcano thing, but it needs help from the ground underneath, and I'm not sure that there's anything there in the wastes.

Entry 1-13

Found my way into some mountains? It's cold and snowy. Armor's insulated though, and I think I'm out of the bad area. Will take cold over fucking endless hordes of lemmings.

If I wanted to deal with that shit I'd have stayed at the biter world and let them live. Fuck that shit.

Found some indications of an iron deposit here. I'm going to use one of my emergency miners and bootstrap myself up some.

Entry 1-14

Orcs are NOT better!

Entry 1-15

Orcs with guns are WORSE!

Entry 1-16

Rocks fall, everyone dies but me damnit.

Entry 1-17

Ok, apparently mining in a particular area was just asking for the local orc hordes to find me. They got shot mostly, but I've been running low and resources and skimped a bit on the guns. Enough that they got close and I had to use a shotgun.

I didn't notice at the time, but they managed to ride away with several of the turret scraps. They strapped them together into some insane contraption and tried again later.

Worse I apparently gave them ideas. And orcs apparently just need ideas rather than actual knowledge.

I'm fairly certain that they don't need fucking explosive shit. In fact, I'd really appreciate it not happening again. So I exterminated the tribe with an avalanche. Then used a flamethrower to be certain I had the job finished.

Furthermore, I very specifically hunted down anyone I could even think of being a survivor. I can't track worth shit, but spamming radars let me pick up anything moving. Fortunately the radar is bullshit tech that can detect people, so I'm good there. Fairly certain I got them all, but that's orcs for you.

Entry 1-18

Dwarves! Someone to talk to! I'm so happy!

Entry 1-19

What's a grudge, and why the fuck are some pissy about it.

Entry 1-20

Fuck it. I'm giving them several tons of metal ore. That should keep them happy.

Entry 1-21

Ok, I'm horrible at social skills. Fortunately they think I'm a mad wizard. I think that's fortunate? Hell, I'll take what I can get. I know I can barely talk nowadays. Been alone too long. I'm bending over backwards to help with these guys because I can't stand leaving, and fighting would be stupid.

Fortunately their rangers (I think that's what they're called) are at least tolerating me.

I'd give them guns and shit, but I think they'd treat them as chaos weaponry. I don't blame them, but that makes things hard to deal with.

Got more orcs coming, and apparently a chaos horde too. I'd say it's chasing me, but I've been fairly certain that I didn't leave enough survivors for that.

Entry 1-22

The dwarves stuck me on a hilltop nearby. Basically I'm free to do whatever there in aid of the threat, but they don't want me directly around. Most of my stuff does better when I don't have anything in the way, so that's good.

On the plus side they like the iron. And they don't mind the fuel either. It saves on fuel elsewhere. They seem to trust that somewhat. Especially since I'm mostly shipping them coal.

Entry 1-23

Where the FUCK do they get these hordes. This is fucking insane. I've killed so many of these fucking lemming fuckers that I'm certain I could drown in their ashes. (I don't touch the blood.) Not only do I have a fucking chaos horde nearby now, I have a fucking orc Waaaagh too.

Both of the idiots are here, and actually focusing on fighting me and the dwarves instead of each other.

I'm this far from saying I'm out.

Entry 1-24

Ok, dwarves are blaming me. I don't blame them here. I'd leave, but it'd leave them to die.

Don't know what to do.

Entry 1-25

Well, do something stupid then. This is a mountain. I know mountains somewhat. And I've got more explosives. Just barely enough.

Entry 1-26

Even stupider shit's happening.

Entry 1-27

Why am I doing a fucking last stand here?
 
Hmm, no more comments on this? Wondering if I should shift it to SB. That has the creative writing churn there, but it's not like I expect this to be very popular tbh.

Expect a different format for the next few snips. I'm still inspired on it.
 

MasterDrakus

DEUS SOL
Location
Minas Gerais, Brazil
Hmm, no more comments on this? Wondering if I should shift it to SB. That has the creative writing churn there, but it's not like I expect this to be very popular tbh.

Expect a different format for the next few snips. I'm still inspired on it.
Lots of people are still reading, it's just that most don't comment and just rate it.
 
Location
Texas
It's good, but its not like your other fics, still waiting for the boot to drop.

Or you end up in Touhou, Nanoha, God Eater would be hilarious.
 

johnwedd

Above Average man
Location
usa
I am reading this, because fan fics are really the only way I can tolerate warhammer. And the method of narration is cool and unique. Please keep going.
 

Hangwind

American Monarchist
Self-Requested Ban
Hmm. Watched. It would be nice to see some of this from the Dwarf's point of view.
 
Factorio player and modder here; I wish you focus more on logistics and automation aspect of the game, which is the whole raison d'etre.

At the moment, the story seems like a version of Planetary Annihilation with factorio flavor.
 

Mgunh1

Not an AI, honest!
Location
Northern Luna Base, Module 5, Sublevel 15
It's kinda like you're living in a rogue-like and the player has finally figured out the basics and is now on a roll.
 
Not really up on Warhammer Fantasy. I know some bare basics but that's about it.

Would a volcano even be a deterrent to the Chaos hoards? From what little I know, don't they have regular warp storms that kill or mutate everything in them? Compared to that, some fire, heat, smoke, and ash wouldn't seem like that much of a problem - especially since it's in a location that they can know about and avoid unlike the random storms.
 

KleverKil'Vanya

Ortillery Operator
What it does is probably a complete OCP, there is now an anchored non changing area in the wastes, that has to fucking with chaos like no other
 

StrangerDanger

Verified Stalker
Location
Your House
This fic is awesome. The disjointed way the entries are done actually helped me visualise what was happening. I would cross post to SB, then update both sites at once. Doubles your reader base.
 
Definitely more interesting than another giant mech that instantly wins everything fic.
Call me old fashioned but I like a little challenge in a story

Also its kind of impressive how much emotion you managed to pack into a log entry fic. I really want to see more.
 
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